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Repent
Contributed by
Ambivalence
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Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 11:37:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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It’s your only hope
Beseech before your last breath
Damnation awaits
Copyright ©
Ambivalence
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2008-10-18 23:37:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Repent
(User Rating: 1 ) by shizzle on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 07:41:06 PM AEST (User
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I like it. short and to the point. |
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Re: Repent
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jaete08 on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 08:57:49 AM AEST (User
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I like the alliteration, and you sum up the Message nicely. |
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