|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Saying the Unsaid
Contributed by
Anu
on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 07:52:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Gulping down the saliva in her throat,
trying not to love him any more..
She tried to bury her emotions in the graveryard,
B'coz they couldnt fit him in their love card..
She tried to be a perfect fit in her jigsawed-life
Not letting any one know of her compromise..
Tears rolled down her eyes,
Nobody was found to ask her ..why?
She always knew what she wanted to do,
To continue to live in well knitted framed life..!
Copyright ©
Anu
... [
2008-10-18 19:52:09]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Saying the Unsaid
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 09:14:49 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I loved the play on words you used........... It is so darn sad. I can so relate to this.
Hugs
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Saying the Unsaid
(User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 01:24:47 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
your muse may bite you at strange times, but she brings you great stuff! great metaphors! i loved this!
thank you
love smiles and blessings |
|
|
Re: Saying the Unsaid
(User Rating: 1 )
by paigiriraj on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 01:34:13 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow!!! Nice poetry..
The "trying not to love him any more.." line is very touchy..
keep rolling more such poems.. they r a real good read..
Well Done! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
