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I still love someone
Contributed by
outlawpoet
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Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 06:36:18 PM in AEST
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It's been so long since we were one
Still i can't believe that we're done
A short lived love that died too fast
It seems that love can never last
I think of your lips pressed against mine
The thought sends chills down my spine
The chills are followed by sorrowful tears
The pain lingers on though it's been years
They never said love was more bitter than sweet
Or how it hurts to lose what makes you complete
Your beauty is majestic like the setting sun
So it's safe to say that i still love someone
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Re: I still love someone
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by shelby on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 06:43:48 PM AEST
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Oh,
this just melted on the page, your heart singing out within your words. You may always love her you know? May your days be blessed with happiness.
Hugs
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Re: I still love someone
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 06:47:50 PM AEST
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Beautiful in its sadness...
Enjoyed the flow..
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Re: I still love someone
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by karoody on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 02:12:20 AM AEST
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very elegantly written. i truly enjoyed this from you and look forward to your next post.
thank you
kara |
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Re: I still love someone
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 09:58:42 AM AEST
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Good flow, easy read.
Deep with sadness and longing
Mike |
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Re: I still love someone
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by allforyou on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 06:24:17 PM AEST
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this is so sad. it makes me wanna cry. i've never lost a love before; then again, now is the first time i've actually felt strongly enough for a person to say i am in love.
my favorite part of this:
"They never said love was more bitter than sweet
Or how it hurts to lose what makes you complete"
actually...scratch that. i like its entirety and am extremely flattered that you are "becoming a fan" of mine because your writing speaks well. |
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Re: I still love someone
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by Mila on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 03:27:58 AM AEST
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| I realy like this one i know the feeling! |
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