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Walk Away
Contributed by
alexischeyenne
on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 04:58:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I watch you walk away,
offering consolations, spewing false emotions
I am relieved and let-down
I watch you walk away
Do you think you're the first to leave?
I am a revolving door,
willing to let anyone in
and they so easily slip through my fingers
I watch you walk away,
telling you "No, you don't love me"
and it's okay.
For some reason, I still hold hope
I still believe people can change
I give a million chances, freely
Until I am irreparably broken.
So I watch you walk away,
but I know I will give anyone else a chance.
I'm afraid to trust,
but I'll do it again.
Copyright ©
alexischeyenne
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2008-10-18 16:58:48]
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Re: Walk Away
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 05:31:51 PM AEST
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Let me welcome to YPDC.... one of the best poetry sites on the net...
This is really sad but I love the positive aspect in it. Not everyone will let you down. Somewhere, someday, you'll find that right person for you....and you won't need that revolving door anymore..
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Re: Walk Away
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by shelby on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 05:40:37 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc,
You captured much with this post.
I felt the lonely in it as you watched people walk away.
It is hard to trust this I know but I do agree with Jen here.
I will watch for more of your work.
Hugs
Michelle
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Re: Walk Away
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by outlawpoet on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 05:56:19 PM AEST
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Hey sometimes its hard to watch someone walk away but we have all done it good write i enjoyed it
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Re: Walk Away
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 10:36:41 PM AEST
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a sad one. u cant be too careful. dont let anyone take advantage only if they intend to break u. take care
-K.Z. |
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