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Star-filled Sky
Contributed by
Catalina
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Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 10:04:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Look up at an endless star-filled sky,
Asking the simple question of why...
Why didn't I show her,
When she was here...
Why didn't I hold her,
As her eyes filled with tears?
Tangled and twisted,
With in the trials of everyday life...
Continously ignoring the pain,
The pain I didn't want to see in her eyes...
I could have changed it,
If only I would have known...
Longing for me so deeply,
For only a bit of my love to be shown...
Endless nights alone she cried,
Once in awhile I would wake to her sighs...
Sighs of desperation,
As she gazed into a star-filled sky...
Night after lonely night,
She could only ask herself why?
Why does love fade away,
Why did his love for me die?
If only I would have stopped,
Stopped only for a moment to see...
My love, my wife,
Oh how she deperately needed me...
Maybe she would be here,
Looking into the star-filled night...
If only I would have told her,
She was the one who made my world so bright...
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Catalina
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Re: Star-filled Sky
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by navydocny on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 10:30:48 PM AEST
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That was a sledgehammer to the chest...
"if" the middle word in "life"
I wonder "if" every moment and perhaps one day, I will haunt her as she has haunted me...
Thank You for sharing this Cat....
It was beautiful and solemn..
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Re: Star-filled Sky
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by ek_da_poet on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 11:31:46 PM AEST
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i liked it, very good, i hope this wasnt u , bad man haha jk
seriously u captured the moment beautifully |
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Re: Star-filled Sky
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by Lilymaemax on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 05:31:30 PM AEST
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Its amazing how certain times cause us to reflect on ones we love like looking at the stars .Who we most want to be with at that moment .You captured this beautifully.
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