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through the door
Contributed by
outlawpoet
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Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 02:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A man can get to walkin' mighty tall and proud and he can't see that he's walkin' through a mighty thick cloud
Now lookin back through the years he saw his anger and he'd done things he did not condone
While thinking back on the memories of his darlin he falls through the door all alone
In his anger unkind words were said that made the teardrops fall
And now he prays that time will hear her pain and love will conquer all
Now he don't go to gettin whisky bent or hell bound for fear of loosin the best thing he'd ever found
He only wants to free her doubtfull mind and melt her cold cold heart
So he is willing to make sacrafices if she is willings to make a brand new start
Now he sits and cries as he looks back on his life
Thinkin' God should have made her a gentlemans wife
But she loves him still and she keeps loving him more
And knows that one day she'll catch him as he
Falls through that door
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Re: through the door
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 03:28:05 PM AEST
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Very interesting...Not too familiar with W. Jennings but I am a Hank Williams Sr fan and I love what you did here..
Thank you..
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Re: through the door
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by rebelwcause on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 03:51:52 PM AEST
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| Wow again, way to use inserts from songs by some of the greatest country musicians ever this was a great idea and to make it yours thats awsome this is an original piece i love it keep it up |
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Re: through the door
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by karoody on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 02:23:55 AM AEST
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very creatively done. you meshed all this together very well.
thank you
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