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My Hero
Contributed by
karoody
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Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
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My hero said he'd done nothing special
I wish he could see
He stood by me when the world was cold
It all blew up
But he remained-
My rock to lean on.
He led me to the path
For me to move forward
I promised to write
But time slipped by
The path kept me busy
Went to find him the other day
Seems he found a path of his own
I hope he understands the distance
My heart holds a place for him
Gratitude for him cannot be measured
Oh, I wish he could see.
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karoody
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2003-03-20 01:25:00]
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Re: My Hero
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by venkat on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 01:47:23 AM AEST
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| Good good write. venkat |
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Re: My Hero
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 01:51:12 AM AEST
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"Play it forward" In the circleof life the good we recieve can be shared with others. If it continues then our actions may one day ultimately affect the lives of those who cared enough to help us in our times of need.
Be well, your continued well being is the best way to repay those who helped. |
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Re: My Hero
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 02:18:45 AM AEST
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Kara thier are ppl I to wish I could find to talk to this was beautiful and I think knowing that he/she helped you is a gift enough. Once again thnx for a beautiful, well-penned poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: My Hero
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by shelby on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 02:31:40 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. Your paths will cross again one day. Circles like these are never broken. When you least expect it there they will be. Wonderful write.
Michelle |
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Re: My Hero
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 02:33:07 AM AEST
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| he sees... believe me, he sees... i am sorry you have had to hide... our similarities cross paths again... i have hid for 5 years... but, with a new married last name and a new life, i am no longer afraid... keep writing it sister... blessings... |
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Re: My Hero
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 06:51:58 AM AEST
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I have known people in the past who have helped me just because I needed it and when I asked what I could do for them in return, they simply said "If anyone ever asks you for help, help them. That is all I want because I cannot be there to help them."
Beautiful poem.
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Re: My Hero
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:59:46 PM AEST
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| Everyone has one of these but they can't express it with your unique simplicity and love |
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