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Jealousy
Contributed by
lilymaemax
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Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 01:50:27 AM in AEST
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It eats you away
Overwhelming Jealousy
End it now always.
Copyright ©
lilymaemax
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2008-10-16 01:50:27]
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Re: Jealousy
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by karoody on
Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 08:17:41 AM AEST
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sound advice for so many. creatively done! thank you.
love and blessings
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Re: Jealousy
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by navydocny on
Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 10:00:33 AM AEST
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Hate the "Green-Eyed Monster"...
Been its victim more than once....
It seduces you then makes you hurt those around you and destroy relationships....
Great write again...
The first line really portrays what it does.....
Steve |
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Re: Jealousy
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by Kodes on
Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 04:59:36 PM AEST
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| quick and simple, i like it! |
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Re: Jealousy
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 05:02:20 PM AEST
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Lovely write... sage advice....
Jenni |
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Re: Jealousy
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by wizard on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 08:17:24 PM AEST
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i hope she heeds your advice...
nicely done,
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