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jigsaw
Contributed by
RosieColt
on
Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 12:02:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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On their own
seperate and alone
They mean nothing
tiny pieces of nothing
lost, they have no meaning
They struggle through the moments of life
trying to fit in
where they belong
Finding their place,
piece by piece
as they grow and weather
they become more difficult to join together
but in the end
its plain to see
together and complete
are the pieces of me
Copyright ©
RosieColt
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2008-10-16 00:02:51]
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Re: jigsaw
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by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 12:58:02 AM AEST
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| This was amazing, great write :) |
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Re: jigsaw
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by karoody on
Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 02:01:16 PM AEST
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i sincerely loved this! a creative metaphor to show that struggle to become who you are today. i look forward to more of your work.
thank you for sharing this with us.
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Re: jigsaw
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 04:56:26 PM AEST
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Let me welcome you to Your Poetry Dot Com.
If this is an indication of the type of poetry you write, you definitely have a fan in me...
I loved the analogy used here and look forward to more of your work...
Jenni |
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Re: jigsaw
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by Anu on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 01:27:48 AM AEST
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AMAZING..!!!
Creativity captured in an impeccable way..!!
Keep Rolling more poems..!!
Regards
Anu |
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Re: jigsaw
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by Spike on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 04:59:39 AM AEST
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quite charming
Spike |
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