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Deception
Contributed by
lilymaemax
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Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 03:35:55 PM in AEST
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They lied to us all,
Kept us from learning the truth
Look forward to their fall.
Copyright ©
lilymaemax
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2008-10-13 15:35:55]
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Re: Deception
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by Lilymaemax on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 03:45:26 PM AEST
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Any one who reads this please ignore it completely. I have just re-read and realize its wrong.Feel a bit of a nelly!!!!
LIilymae |
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Re: Deception
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 06:00:40 PM AEST
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niiice. its okay ur only one syllable extra haha. i wonder wat news story u were watching that made u write this. politics maybe? take care
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Re: Deception
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by shelby on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 08:35:36 PM AEST
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I liked it and do not do well writing these.
Yes I do not watch the news I think everyone is a lier these days LOL.
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Michelle |
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Re: Deception
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by ell_03 on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 09:25:27 PM AEST
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| It is still very true, despite the extra syllable |
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Re: Deception
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by navydocny on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 09:52:59 PM AEST
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It speaks for itself....
I think a lot of people have this in mind....
Great job again!
Steve |
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Re: Deception
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th October 2008 @ 06:52:22 PM AEST
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| Im guessing this may be about politicians. I feel the samy way. Great poem. |
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