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Why..?
Contributed by
Anu
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Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 10:10:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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I've got answers to why this world is sphere,
But I'm wondering why my thoughts have become so unclear;
There are hundreds of people my eyes can see,
But why is my soul searching for one human entity;
You consider me special and your dear,
Then why cant you feel my invisible tears;
You believe that you know me in and out,
Then why cant you understand my queries and doubts;
why is my mind wandering for an answer,
Could me please direct me the way?
I feel this life is playing a prank,
Why have my senses become so blank?
Can you just tell me
WHY...?
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Anu
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2008-10-13 10:10:28]
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Re: Why..?
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 14th October 2008 @ 07:37:19 AM AEST
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a very deep soul searching write...i enjoyed it very much. a sense of loneliness and weariness stands out to me in this write. best wishes to you for brighter days.
i look forward to more writes from you.
kara |
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Re: Why..?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th October 2008 @ 10:19:42 AM AEST
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I guess no matter how much two people love each other and no matter how much we may want to, we can't always read minds.
I don't have an answer either, why some seem to be able to do it and others not. Guess that why we all learned to speak.
A thought provoking write. |
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Re: Why..?
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by 110277 on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 03:40:09 PM AEST
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this huge and hollow question "why?" has already become a pathalogical mania.. at least for me..
that millions "why?" on everything we do, everything we see, everyone we know.. it eats our mind.. seriously.
beautiful poem. i like the way it's kind of 'twisted'
i mean it's straight but curly
it's strong but mild..
thank you. |
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