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The Storm
Contributed by
Urizen
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Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 05:32:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As the storm around us pumped and raged,
You slowly, silently came of age,
Pushed against that padded quilt,
The red droplets like cherries mirrored my guilt.
Sweet girl,
Sweet baby,
My baby cakes,
Welcome to this
Your dark night
After this glorious day.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2008-10-13 05:32:10]
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Re: The Storm
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by zenith66 on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 08:36:16 AM AEST
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| very nice work, i was expecting a barge of storm imagery but i was pleasantly surprised at he soft attention to detail here, very well written, i especially loved the first two lines, very very beautiful, |
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Re: The Storm
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 05:34:14 AM AEST
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Good writing, soft imagery and warm language.
-Phil |
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