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LIFE
Contributed by
lilymaemax
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Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 03:39:58 PM in AEST
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Born into this world
Enjoy your time while your here
It all ends too soon.
Copyright ©
lilymaemax
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2008-10-12 15:39:58]
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Re: LIFE
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 08:40:20 PM AEST
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Very powerfull.
Awesome and welcome.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: LIFE
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by navydocny on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 09:05:11 PM AEST
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First time up at bat and you knock it out of the park!
Love it!
So very true with the edge of forebode...
Great advice and proof that you can say powerful things with very few words....
Steve |
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Re: LIFE
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 11:04:37 PM AEST
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niiice...yup, life is so short, yet sweet. keep it up! take care
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Re: LIFE
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by redsleeve on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 06:13:56 PM AEST
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| good one! |
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Re: LIFE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th October 2008 @ 01:23:09 PM AEST
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| cool mam!! Well done!! |
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Re: LIFE
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by Lionel on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 07:33:03 PM AEST
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Well, I must admit
It's true what you say,
So, I must not just sit
and wile away the day.
I see my duty clear;
I must'nt waste my time.
I'll worship Christ, my dear,
and trust in him, sublime.
I'll care for others first,
before I do myself;
For that is what he did,
while on the cross bereft.
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Re: LIFE
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by windowguy on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 02:18:11 AM AEST
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| Better than a lot of others! The message is clear and not obscure (plenty others are).Well done. |
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