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Sins Within
Contributed by
Kane
on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 03:00:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Pain, hate, anger and rage,
The demon inside me is tying to escape,
Flames grow, as the body turns cold,
Sins within, are my sins till the end,
Death my goal, death so cold,
Blood runs, fore I'm the demons son,
Given to the world, within me lives the worm,
Release my seed, as I rape the queen,
Heir to the thorne, I'm an enity onto my own,
Answer to no one, death to the holy son,
To all those that pray, you won't be saved,
Bow at my feet, fore if I face God he will accept defeat,
Heart & Soul
Kane
Copyright ©
Kane
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2008-10-12 03:00:34]
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Re: Sins Within
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by Benjina on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 03:10:44 AM AEST
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Wow that's really powerful.
You used the theme of hate and death well all the way through this poem, I felt. |
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Re: Sins Within
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by karoody on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 03:36:30 AM AEST
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Very powerful words. I could feel the energy of them. Glad to see your talents up here again.
Take care
Kara |
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Re: Sins Within
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 09:14:44 PM AEST
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Great writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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