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Open your eyes
Contributed by
jenniferstein2006
on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 09:15:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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open your eyes
do you see what i see?
blood dripping down my arm
and onto my jeans
open your eyes
won't you please
my world is crumbling
right beneath my knees
open your eyes
don't you see the pain?
the hardship?
the sorrow?
the crying in the rain???
open your eyes
something is wrong
can't you tell?
my soul
is gone...
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jenniferstein2006
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2008-10-11 21:15:03]
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Re: Open your eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 12:43:00 AM AEST
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Deep, I felt the pain, I enjoyed the read, please keep posting.
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Re: Open your eyes
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by Jen54 on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 12:50:54 AM AEST
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that was a great poem... it really touched me...
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