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Acid Raps
Contributed by
solidsnake116
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Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 01:24:25 PM in AEST
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its unreal, its like a *****in dream
the wickedest darkest *****in stuff i've seen
popped two hits of acid and the trip was mean
tried to find some ***** but there wasn't none
so instead i just fired off my *****in gun
walk into the streets and unload so motha flippin fun
now things are gettin crazy, losin my grip
cause im a wicked maniac on an acid trip
i'm gunnin people down then replace the clip
i see the blue and reds comin after me
but around me's not the best motha *****in place to be
shot the first piggy down the others on a knee
blew his squishy brains out and *****in set him free
but acid crazy like that ya feel it in ya toes
could be chill one minute but the next who knows
pull the d-eagle out an put a bullet in ya nose
cause thats how the killer acid trip goes
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Re: Acid Raps
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by Spike on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 06:12:16 AM AEST
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Nicely done, especially for the end, as I was wondering where this one was going.
Usually when I have a bad trip, I go somewhere else come next holidays.
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Re: Acid Raps
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by lilmissy on
Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 02:20:31 AM AEST
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| AHH ACID :D reminds me of fat albert and summertime :) it's been a while since i've tripped man, it's been a while. this poem makes me miss it...*tear*...lol... |
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Re: Acid Raps
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by amber_vonHorror on
Monday, 10th November 2008 @ 05:19:44 AM AEST
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wow well written and articulated well from the mind of an acid user.
Its fun |
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Re: Acid Raps
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by Cathi on
Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 12:58:39 AM AEST
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| I like the maintained rhythm of this rap. You obviously have a very good ear and instinct for what words have the most impact. The combination of language and sound is brilliant and makes the imagery as surreal as the trip itself. |
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