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THE RED SEA
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 04:28:34 PM in AEST
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Like jennie's spark in dark shinnin
No matter how high water gets
Or Howloud stikkin thunder roars.
Here's the plug, ain't drowned yet.
(God parted the Red sea for moses)
God just touched in, Jesus name.
Sharp like the vision is clear.
Only luv could do this simple, thang.
Any day of the the long, long year.
Faith moves mountains to the sea.
Unload inner burdens, doubt .
Poof, a miracle is born to life.
We got's plenty to sing songs, about.
Jus turn on your minds eye.
Believe against all mortal law defines.
Unleash luvs gentle touches, see?
Immortality can't really be denied
Copyright ©
emystar
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2008-10-10 16:28:34]
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Re: THE RED SEA
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 05:29:24 PM AEST
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Amazing write, Emy..just like the parting of ths sea!!
Hugs and luv
Jenni |
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Re: THE RED SEA
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by Crow on
Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 06:23:11 PM AEST
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| great faith, has always done its job..good write Emy..Lane |
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Re: THE RED SEA
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by karoody on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 02:47:52 AM AEST
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Wow, Emy! I am impressed! It amazes me that this came out of you from Jenni's work earlier. I read her peice and your comment. Her write was beautiful and inspirational, no doubt. Obviously, It worked magic with your soul...
thank you
Kara |
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Re: THE RED SEA
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 06:25:41 AM AEST
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emy, you never cease to amaze me
with your wisdom and insight. I
love it when you write like this. It
gives me hope and shines like a
strong light cutting through the
dark.
Thank you for the inspiration.
It is beautiful. As are you. ^_^
*hugs*
~ Breezy
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Re: THE RED SEA
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 08:08:38 AM AEST
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You have much wisdom in your words, and as Roxie said, they are inspiring indeed.
Good write dear Emy, I think this is a lovely response to Jenni's poem :D
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: THE RED SEA
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by spooky on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 03:48:53 PM AEST
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amazing write,,GOD has and will continue his perfect plan,,
a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: THE RED SEA
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 02:56:51 AM AEST
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| I always love it when one poem inspires another. Gotta love it. So... the inspiration made you write an inspiring poem, huh? Great job... great flow. Thank you... enjoyed ot a lot! |
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Re: THE RED SEA
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 09:29:42 PM AEST
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A totally impressive write you have
here my dearest Emy. You have so much
wisdom and insight my dear friend. An inspiring
write. I can see how Jenni's poem inspired you
to write this. beautiful writing as always. Well
done EmyStar~
love, hugs & prayers,
dreamer |
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Re: THE RED SEA
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 09:59:38 PM AEST
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| This is a really good piece of writing. I hope you are writing more because i enjoy your poetry |
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Re: THE RED SEA
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by kye on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 08:35:10 PM AEST
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Em, you are the sweetest person. When I read your poetry, I always feel your spunk(iness). You are very lively. I adore that about you.
I've always thought your poetry had a lyrical feel to it. I like the way you clarify life, feelings and reality.
Thank you Em for all that you are.
Kie |
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Re: THE RED SEA
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 07:38:40 PM AEST
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| What a beautiful poem. Your writing is truly joy to read. I can tell you have strong Faith! Very inspirational! |
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