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Lying Eyes
Contributed by
lnnie
on
Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 01:21:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It could be that
the Thunder in your eyes
will not reach out and
strike my Heart Full Force.
It could be that
your words will not
wash me away
to an ocean already
full of tears.
Maybe I will not
fall down
this time
the deep well
into my quavering soul;
maybe not;
but I don't think so.
I might be misunderstanding
you there in bed with her
and not believe my own
lying eyes;
my ears might be
faulty;
she might be the illusion
I had of you and I.
But I don't think so.
Copyright ©
lnnie
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2008-10-10 13:21:04]
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Re: Lying Eyes
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 05:59:32 PM AEST
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Welcome to our global family here at ypdc.
This is awesome writing.
It's deep, clear, moving.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lying Eyes
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 08:43:06 AM AEST
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This is so sad. I hope its not true, and something you just thought up.
If it is something you thought up, I like how you have almost split the poem in two, the doubts and the realisations.
It seems like the whole feeling of this is shock.
Good write,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Lying Eyes
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by rebelwcause on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 12:33:56 PM AEST
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| this is a good peom i like that you were able to flow without rhyming good work |
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