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~FIREWORKS~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 10:39:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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~~^~~
Out of the darkness
Fiery flowers bursting
Lighting up my life
~~^~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
... [
2008-10-09 22:39:51]
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 01:07:58 PM AEST
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Girlfriend, this is a very powerfull write.
Before I read this I saw a vision of moses crossing the Read sea.
Bingo, after reading this a song is being born.
thanks for the inspiring words and the nudg to put it on paper.
will post later.
Luv it, huggs, smiles, thanks, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by karoody on
Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 08:55:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful Jenni! So few words, yet an awesome image!
love and hugs
kara |
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 06:39:20 AM AEST
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Wow Jenni. This is extraordinary! I just read Emy's piece
that was inspired by this, and I can see now just how and
why she WAS inspired! This is one of the most exceptional
haiku's I've read! That second line is especially powerful!
WOW! What a write!!
~ Breezy
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 09:47:17 AM AEST
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I saw Emy's response to this, and I can see why she was inclined to write one. An inspiring write.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 01:16:48 PM AEST
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What a lovely little water color
painting this is Jenn, quite vivid,
beautifully done as always.
you are exquisit at your craft.
& thank you sincerely, for
your read and comment.
Ben . . .
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th October 2008 @ 06:53:56 PM AEST
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| This is a very nice Haiku. I hope that they enjoyed it! |
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by outlawpoet on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 03:22:08 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem at first i was like what is she talking about but thats what makes it powerfull i think too many times people go crazy with a poem telling a story or try too hard to get a point across and that ruins a poem great write. i think we should be more active in reading commenting and critiquing poems so please read and comment on mine and pass it along good write |
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 01:31:50 AM AEST
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Nice haiku, Jenni.
*applauds* |
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 10:20:33 AM AEST
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I love this- It reminds me of the scene
in Lord of the Rings, with the fireworks and
party! And the children chase the butterflys and
flowers! |
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 06:48:24 AM AEST
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Thank you my friend for the beautiful write. It is you though, who has proven to be a light in the sky for me to admire.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 09:20:55 PM AEST
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*wow* Jenni~
You are so damn good at Haiku's.
This is brilliant. I totally love it.
Now I have to go and read Emy's
poem.
Fine work dear poetess. Keep up the
sensational work.
love ya,
dreamer |
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 02:53:19 PM AEST
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| Yep! mmm it is what good friends can do. simple effective good write. inspiring |
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Re: ~FIREWORKS~
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by windowguy on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 02:28:02 AM AEST
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| Brilliant! You've captured the wonder of it all. |
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