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Every Time
Contributed by
Ambivalence
on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 10:07:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Every time I see you smile,
I lose my breath for a while.
Every time you catch my eyes,
they want to stay open wide.
Every time you speak to me,
it sounds like a soft melody.
Every time you laugh at my humor,
your gentle giggles make you even cuter.
Every time you steal my heart,
you keep me from falling apart.
Every time we warmly embrace each other,
I wish that moment would freeze forever.
Every time we wave good-bye,
the joy just crumbles inside.
Every time I think of you and me,
I consider an opportunity.
Every time I carve down these emotions,
the more I crave you to notice my devotion.
But every time I try to tell you the truth,
I get the sense you don’t feel the way I do.
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Ambivalence
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2008-10-09 22:07:31]
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Re: Every Time
(User Rating: 1 )
by funnyface09 on
Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 03:46:48 AM AEST
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ohh my,the end is just so sad..i almost cried..
it is a beautiful write and eventhough the end is sad,i like how you wrote the ending...
my favourite part :
"Every time you laugh at my humor,
your gentle giggles make you even cuter."
keep posting..
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Re: Every Time
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by cooley1818 on
Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 12:10:31 PM AEST
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definatly i can relate, was a great write.. i was in a relationship for 4 years feeling that same way, then havin to walk away, was more then i could bare. keep writing you showd your emotions and feelings very well....
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