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Diamond In The Rough
Contributed by
EMOPOET
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Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 04:09:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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--- Each day i go through more and more drama
--- Sometimes I'm not even wanted by my mama
--- I tend to feel more hate than love
--- I pray to god for an answer from above
--- What am I here for
--- That's what I ask myself when I don't wanna
live anymore
--- I think to myself I've had enough
--- I'm tired of crying over the petty stuff
--- As I get older life gets tuff
--- I soon find more stuff I suck at
--- I feel I walk around on my head a dunce hat
--- Each day I get another slice, another dice, another cut from lifes razor
--- Each day I get knocked to the ground like I'm shot with a tazer
--- I try and hold my head high
--- I feel my whole life's been a lie
--- I just wanna die
--- If I keep trying new stuff
--- Maybe I'll find I'm a DIAMOND IN THE ROUGH
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Re: Diamond In The Rough
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 05:14:31 PM AEST
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I've asked some of the same questions life is tough but everyone has to go though it some are lucky and get it easier than other's but people who tend to get everything they want tend to be even more miserable than the people who have to work for it if you are a diamond in the rough then you just have to find the thing that makes you shine
Wow longest comment i've wrote lol
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Re: Diamond In The Rough
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 09:51:50 PM AEST
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Good descriptive poem, and yes, you need to
try something new. Incidentally, answers to
any of your questions can be found in the
Bible. Read my poem: "With Good Purpose"
It may answer some of your questions. |
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