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Forbidden Fruit
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 02:39:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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Pluck thee, now, forbidden fruit
Most wicked be most drole
It shines with inner, sinfull light
A warning was foretold
The snake, he hisses, "Take a bite.
No harm befall from one."
Juice runs down thy slender throat
Thy wicked deed is done
O! but now the thunder booms
You're cast out in the dark
Decietfull aren't allowed inside
Though actions leave their mark
And, though she be thrown away,
Brought sorrow on the Earth, it
Shall be well-known, she'll always say
Her sinfull sin was worth it
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Re: Forbidden Fruit
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by karoody on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 04:52:58 PM AEST
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an interesting angle to the tale! i love the unique style you put into it!
thank you
kara |
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Re: Forbidden Fruit
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 06:57:58 PM AEST
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| Most frown on this but I'm not a religious person and it's surprising that someone can keep my interest in a poem about a religious story, so for that my hat is off to you great poem |
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