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Cold Decay
Contributed by
zer0
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Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 01:44:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Cold and black and dark
Those memories are but a slide show before my eyes,
A beginning and an end as I remember how we lived and loved,
And now my cold dead form takes the life from you.
A beginning and an end,
Every story has an end.
I feel nothing.
A wonderful magical moment.
A moment that was shared,
In these eyes before they went dead.
And now they watch you,
Squirming like a rat.
You have no place to go.
What wonderful magic now,
That is so far beyond you,
There is no escape.
Your tears are like lowing,
Of cattle before the stocks.
And this is the way the world works.
Because you deceived me,
Because you lied,
I died,
And now there is no one to protect you,
From it,
From me.
Every story has an ending.
Copyright ©
zer0
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Re: Cold Decay
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 02:04:04 PM AEST
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I loved this, zerO..... *wondering how my story will end*
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Re: Cold Decay
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by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 02:10:16 PM AEST
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Where did this come from?! It gave me cold chills. This is a really good write!
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Re: Cold Decay
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 10:43:16 PM AEST
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Wow, this gave me chills too
Great write Miles
Always,
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Re: Cold Decay
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 09:00:57 AM AEST
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| i think i creamed myself reading this one... i love this kind of work... check my stuff out if you do too. keep writing. -jason |
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Re: Cold Decay
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by orgygirl on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 05:26:49 AM AEST
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There is so much truth within this. I relate. I wish I could say more but there is nothing more to say than well done.
Thank you for the comment on April Thirtieth I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Re: Cold Decay
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by OreO on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 07:39:19 PM AEST
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This was different to read
I enjoyed it
Keep em' coming
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