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The Extravagant Escape
Contributed by
Ambivalence
on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 10:52:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Fight reality.
Surrender to fantasy.
You shall be set free.
Copyright ©
Ambivalence
... [
2008-10-07 22:52:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Extravagant Escape
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 02:05:52 AM AEST (User
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rhyming may not be traditional. geez i can't remember the rules. i din't pay attention in that class! my teacher was mean! i decided i liked to march to my own drums better...lol
perhaps that's why i liked this write :-)
thank you
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Re: The Extravagant Escape
(User Rating: 1 ) by ell_03 on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 09:27:35 PM AEST (User
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I like that it is a haiiku but you were still able to rhyme it. It's nice. |
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