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Martyr of regret

Contributed by dagonet on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 11:06:46 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

bound, gagged beaten to submit,
torn from the walls dying with each sustained hit,
laughing and crying, bleeding inside, left to rot and fester,
ripped from limb to heart, from ribs to soul, a broken lifless jester,

imprisoned by hatred envisioned like rabid wolves closing in with hunger,
brittle and weak, afraid of shadows and masquerading thunder,
left alone in silence and pain, clawing at the memories of the light,
falsified, brutalised and cauterized are the wounds kept hidden from sight,

immaculate scars coagulate and seize wars within their own twisted kin,
retributional anger flows stronger and deeper, breaking point now at the drop of a gavel-like pin,
free reigning absolution echos like screams in the annexes of a shattered mind,
a parchment of powder, dust and dried sacrement bearing the death warrant by my hand was signed,

created by a force of pure darkness and deception to steal the righteous of life,
Causing a ripple so accurate later inflicts a tidal wave of panick fueled pain, sharper than any reapers scythe,
commisioned for every broken soul, apt payment for ferrying the undeserving to eternitys desolate land,
scavenging stolen dignity and pride torn from a fallen childs crippled attempt at an outstretched hand,

I am deciept, i am damnation, i am lost beyond any saviour, love or repair,
I am defilled and tortured, i am a martyr of regret, and I walk away.........

For this existance I no longer care.

Copyright © dagonet ... [ 2008-10-07 11:06:46]
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Re: Martyr of regret (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 03:54:47 PM AEST
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hey, im very glad you no longer feel this way, next time write something happy please lol,
not much to review here in terms of an artistic write, its more of a spilling of emotion onto the page, let me give some advice(i dont mean to put you down at all, on the contrary) but give it some structure, some meaning, something thats less about your pain and self suffering and more about the lessons youve learned maybe, okay sorry lol, just keep it up okay...

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