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Daughter Hidden Pain
Contributed by
SSK
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Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 06:16:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Falling through the sky
Time passes quickly by
The blood ribbons fall from my wrists
My heart is aching and my stomach twists
You think you know me, but you don't
You think you feel for me, but you won't
You have your world and your own life
And I have this darkness and a knife
You're always smiling every day
I'm always crying the pain away
You pick me up when I fall
But throw me down when I can't handle it all
I'm the sinner, you're the saint
You cover the mistakes, with white paint
My mistakes can't seem the hide
Because my words are colored tie-dye
You think you're cool, but you're not
You think I'm stupid, but I'm really caught
Caught in the tide of the sea
The sea of emotion, but you won't carry me
You make me feel like I am dead
But I still bleed the color red
Why does my heart ache like this so?
Because you're my mother, and I can't tell you to go.
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SSK
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2008-10-07 06:16:23]
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Re: Daughter Hidden Pain
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by snoopington on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 11:27:52 AM AEST
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o my god great poem really, so much heart and sadness, i like your style of writing i only started writing myself and will be happy if i can produce something like this some day.
keep up the good work.
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Re: Daughter Hidden Pain
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 04:45:31 PM AEST
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wow...you definitely got the emotions down on paper. thank you for this...
Glad to hear your soul is not in that same prison still. Welcome to the site, by the way!
Take care
Kara |
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