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Smoke and Mirrors
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:57:46 PM in AEST
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Smoke and mirrors
You think I don’t see
Slight of hand
The game you ran on me
Honest I am
Heart on sleeve
Yet you choose
To deceive
My heart is cut
Focus out of whack
Never will be same
No turning back
Smoke and mirrors
Picture show
How broken am I
You will never know
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2008-10-06 20:57:46]
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by navydocny on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 09:04:33 PM AEST
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Its always darkest before the dawn.....
Like a bone that is fractured, you will become stronger....
Very raw and heartfelt...
I feel you on this...
Thank you for sharing...
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 09:27:57 PM AEST
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Oh Shari this is so darn sad.
What going on from when we talked half hour ago??
Pm me
hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 10:12:59 PM AEST
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aw ... sweetie this is sad. I hope everything is okay. *hugs you*
I know of smoke and mirrors. Things seldom are as they seem, but
if someone is actually USING these tricks to deceive you, then that
is downright cruelty. I'm sorry you have to endure this.
prayers, hopes and thoughts with you, hun,
~ Breezy
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by karoody on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 11:59:25 PM AEST
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Shari
Deceit never feels good
It would be great if we could trust and love without being bitten. I wish I could guarantee your heart pain free days forever. But we would not appreciate the smiles without the pain would we? Just remember how many of us are waiting for you with hugs when you want them...
Kara |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 10:03:51 AM AEST
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| I`m with Shel, when I left you, all was good..this is dark..Lane |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 03:31:55 PM AEST
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Sweet Shari this is so sad my dear friend. I hope
and pray that all is good and well with you. You are
always caring about others and helping friends through
rough times. I want you to know that you have alot of
friends here who love and care for you dearest Shari.
You are not alone, we won't let you be. May God send
you a beacon of light to guide your beautiful heart to
safer shores my friend.
Much love, hugs & prayers,
Dreamer |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 05:24:12 PM AEST
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thank you everyone so much for the love...I am a big believer in venting and letting go of what is hurting you...so I am fine now thank you
Shari |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 07:57:41 PM AEST
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Very deep write Shari, Glad to hear all is
well...........Mike |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 8th October 2008 @ 07:11:52 AM AEST
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judging by your comment, writing this helped... that's often the case...
great post,
wiz |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 12:49:39 PM AEST
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Loved the title which instantly drew me in
Im happy to say that the rest didn't disappoint either.
Great write
Steve |
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