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Music of the Soul
Contributed by
Starchild7
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Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:56:20 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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I hear the words you want me to hear.
The music ripples through my mind,
It speaks directly to my soul and we
Connect on the interplanetary grid of
Telepathy.
Taking you back through the mists
Of time to a place of familiarity
Where you felt safe I reached out
To you from another dimension.
Our spirits merged and became
One, we dissolved into each others
Love and locked it away in our
Hearts through time and space.
My soul soars high on the
Vibration of your love as it
Comes sweeping in from
The universe and gathers me up.
It carries me away on a sea
Of tranquillity; I am lost deep
In your soul forever as we reunite
And become one again.
With love and light Starchild
Copyright ©
Starchild7
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2008-10-06 20:56:20]
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Re: Music of the Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 09:59:30 PM AEST
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wow, Star! This was wonderful. I'm so glad you put your inspiration in
the author's note, because throughout the read I kept hearing "The Voice".
I think it was a combination of your note and that powerful first line!
What wonderful inspiration you gained and what a perfectly woven
piece of poetry. There are some amazing lines in this. I especially
love the last stanza!
super post! ^_^
~ Breezy
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Re: Music of the Soul
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 02:31:53 AM AEST
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been a long time since i heard their tunes...always cool to have that inspiration. this definitely works for you...truely enchanting words
thank you
kara |
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Re: Music of the Soul
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 03:44:07 PM AEST
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beautifly and soulfull,j just like the blues, your poetry really is sleek here, a real trip along your emotional self, i am glad you were inspired by the blues because it made for a great poem my friend, ture words and its almost like your poem is the blues, just so relaxing and unchained!! sorry lol im going on a bit,
anyway great write keep it up!!! |
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Re: Music of the Soul
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 10:58:58 PM AEST
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whoa! it's almost as if i'm somewhere else as i read this. a very profound and interesting write. u were truly inspired by the music of Blues. take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Music of the Soul
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by Starchild7 on
Wednesday, 8th October 2008 @ 03:09:03 PM AEST
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Awww thank you so much everyone for the really awesome comments i really appreciate them all. I decided to post this one as i recently saw the Moody Blues in concert a couple of weeks ago and since then my inspiration has been coming back which i am really thankful about and they have always been a great inspiration to me.
With love and light Starchild |
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Re: Music of the Soul
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 8th October 2008 @ 08:00:04 PM AEST
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You are a star, dancing with the milky way.
Mystical indeed and truly lovely work.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Music of the Soul
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 01:31:07 PM AEST
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Simply dreamy and fragile,
the quality of a lotus blossom.
most beautiful writting . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: Music of the Soul
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by RougeCoeur on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 01:40:33 PM AEST
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Your words drift and flow
a soft sail upon the breeze
like gentle notes
that brush against my ear.
Very nicely penned Starchild
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