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Every Now and Then
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 11:04:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The love that once thrived is now deceases
With it went our friendship, our intimate bond
The connection is severed, lost forever, among the rain and stormy weather
I search for your face among the crowds of people who loom so largely
A stranger, I have become so lonely
Never knowing from where the next minute will come and sweep me away
The trail I follow, littered with reminders, leads me to nowhere good
I seek protection and shelter, a warm body to hold and guide me through the night
Tired eyes close for a peaceful surrender from over stimulation, all the pretty colors collide
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2008-10-06 11:04:19]
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Re: Every Now and Then
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 10:21:45 PM AEST
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As always jyss, you send the mind to wander within waves of fervent emotion.
There is not always clarity for the reader, but you never fail to deliver a delicious
feast for the heart. There is direction without direction in this, if you know what
I mean. I love it. I have felt this, and it is sometimes all you can do to just breathe
you know?
Exceptional, as always,
~ Breezy
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Re: Every Now and Then
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 10:58:02 AM AEST
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| These open and honest writes from you always freak me out a little! This reads very intimately, and the wording lonely. A very sad and emotive piece. |
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