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I`m Trying
Contributed by
crow
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Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 10:02:14 AM in AEST
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You can hear this on My "Home Page, a small board I use for music..
I'm trying, to smile Dad
everythings so blue
without you.
Its cold here, so lonesome
every lesson
getting Me through this.
its hard to find strength
I can hold on too.
I can't find a positive.. side
of My blue...
I`m trying...to be strong Dad
twenty-four..and need You
so badly...
are You still proud of me
am I still your baby
that little girl knew
its hard to find strength
I can hold on too...
I can't find a positive.. side
of My blue...
"I`m trying
every day Dad
its hard without You beside me
are You still proud of me
am I still your baby
that little girl knew
its hard to find strength
I can hold on too...
I can't find one positive.. side
of My blue... K Smith/ LVincent
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Re: I`m Trying
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 02:33:37 PM AEST
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I read this before it is pretty.
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Re: I`m Trying
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by karoody on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 05:32:22 PM AEST
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thank you lane...pleasant surprise to wake up to! i love this! hope everyone else does too!
kara |
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Re: I`m Trying
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 08:50:24 AM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: I`m Trying
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 10:03:53 AM AEST
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Lovely adaptation of one of my fav poets here, Lane... I'll listen to it a little later and I'm sure I would just love it...
Jenni |
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Re: I`m Trying
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 10:38:01 AM AEST
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| thank you all for taking the time to listen and read, Kara whats not to like..the simple bare emotion laid out before us. It could have been two words.."I`m Trying..that stands as volume to me. thank you, Lane |
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Re: I`m Trying
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th October 2008 @ 08:05:58 PM AEST
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This choked me up the first time I read Karabear's poem and it chokes me up listening and reading it. It's really sad yet beautifully done here. You did a really good job adapting it to music.
Kara, I am positive he is still proud of you. I am positive you are still his baby.
*huge ebar hug*
Love,
Tim
P.S. What the hell? No votes! I'd give it a ten if I could. |
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Re: I`m Trying
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by emystar on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 10:41:23 PM AEST
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Sad but good work from you both.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: I`m Trying
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 1st June 2018 @ 01:39:20 AM AEST
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| Beautiful!!!!!!!!! |
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