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Magicalone
Contributed by
chrissylee
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Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 06:15:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I’ve spent eight years of searching,
Trying to find,
A man sweet and compassionate,
Who’d accept me faults and all.
Seems every time I’ve found a guy,
That even came close,
He would get what he wanted,
Then walk out the door.
I’ve had time to sit down,
To think about life,
What I really want,
About the things that matter most.
I think its much better for myself,
To face the world alone,
There’ll be no more heart aches,
No more tears.
I am better off making,
Magic alone.
For that’s how people know me,
That is my nick,
Magicalone,
You can read it two ways,
Magical one or magic alone.
I’ve had enough heart ache to last a life time,
Betrayed by the best,
Lied to by the rest,
Some say love is blind,
I believe truly that it is.
The ones who’ve betrayed me,
They know who they are,
They will never find love,
For know now how I Can curse.
They think they are above anyone,
Thinking that they are better than anyone,
Some even think for a moment,
When they find someone new.
That they have been able to escape,
This little witches curse.
Think again you fools,
As you will never escape,
The gypsy roses curse.
Live happy while you have her,
For eventually, she will do to you,
Ten fold what you have done to me.
Magicalone I will forever be!
Copyright ©
chrissylee
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2008-10-06 06:15:32]
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Re: Magicalone
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 12:43:48 PM AEST
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You go girlfriend!
I live alone but I'm not always alone.
Good work as I can tottally relate.
I entertain myself.
Huggs, smiles, luv, magicalone,
emy |
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Re: Magicalone
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 06:23:43 PM AEST
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This is a touching write.
I am so sorry. Shame on the bad men shame shame.
You are magic and this poem is beautiful, though sad.
Hugs
MIchelle |
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Re: Magicalone
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 01:04:56 AM AEST
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Holy Gypsy only two comments on this piece????
I'm amazed this was really good.
Glad I never ***** ya off...lol
This was truely a great read.
Thanks for sharing
~Bin~ |
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Re: Magicalone
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th March 2010 @ 11:57:14 PM AEST
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As I read along, I was thinking hw much I can relate to this. Then you took that twist around the fifth stanza then I thought...d'oh! lol...nope, can't relate to that. I however do wish I could put a curse on a few of them.
Anyway, really enjoyed this.
Thank you,
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