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loading the solution
Contributed by
polaris773
on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 11:52:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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He’s slipping through the cracks in his heart
His mind is unable to keep up with the pace of his heart
His heart killing his head
His head is going to kill his body
The struggles for his soul is restless
And he can’t keep this fight going
He’s playing his favorite song
And gets ready to stop the flow of thought
He’s loading his solution
His hand is steady like it used to be
And the bang is slowing his mind
His problems are over and now he can rest
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2008-10-06 11:52:26]
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Re: loading the solution
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 01:30:54 PM AEST
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| a short one, just like the instance of suicide, i think, but killing oneself doesnt prove anything but cowardice, not saying u are one but life has many problems and one cant just walk away from them. We all hav ups and downs, it's the natural cycle of life. We only live once, and we often take life for granted. again, good write. take care |
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Re: loading the solution
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 02:26:45 PM AEST
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This is well written but the subject makes me very sad and really cringe. I hope this is not what you are thinking of, I hope it is just a poem.
Michelle |
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