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lost in a mirror
Contributed by
snoopington
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Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 11:12:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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im looking at you,
your looking at me
with a blink of an eye,
i know this cant be
theres only one of us {im right]
yeah thats me.
i make the descions and choices in life,
what the hell are you doing put down that knife
you have a life,its good,its fun
if you leave what happens to your son,
he'll grow up with no dad,so sad
he doesnt deserve that only five and full of life,
so stop being mad,
so smile,cry,laugh about live life
nothings that bad it cant be sorted out.
so now as i look at you,
you look at me,i realise that this can be,
without you im not me.
i stop and laugh at this perfection,
you are me,my reflection.
Copyright ©
snoopington
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2008-10-05 23:12:58]
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Re: lost in a mirror
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 02:07:05 AM AEST
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Welcome to our global family here at ypdc.
For a first write this is incredible.
keep written.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: lost in a mirror
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by The_Unknown on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 04:32:30 AM AEST
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Great first write.(:
I like it, and I can't wait to hear more from you.
And like Emy said, welcome.
-T_U
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Re: lost in a mirror
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by karoody on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 05:38:32 PM AEST
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i agree, so much depth for a first write. hope you enjoy being a part of the site
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Re: lost in a mirror
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 01:06:40 PM AEST
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A touching poem vrey nicely
and convincingly expressed,
beautiful flow . . .
thank you for your comment
and read . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: lost in a mirror
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by kelleigh on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 01:42:47 PM AEST
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| thats really amazing matt,seriously!!!! so proud :):):):):) |
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Re: lost in a mirror
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:46:00 PM AEST
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| an excellent first poem, the fluidity demonstates a maturity in your poetry, which is interesting. very good. |
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