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Paean
Contributed by
navydocny
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Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 04:19:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The heralds of time sing the paean, of cocentric circles of all lives plebeian
Swiftly on blinding wings of vehemence, these harbingers sing of lore with altiloquence
Happiness, sorrow, anger and lust, all of our trials with their verdicts of just
Where we did we start and where do we end, can the fractured bones of time make mend
Choices that are made, with time or with haste, opportunities and friendships laid to waste
Vengeful trumpets blaring their strain, of our loves, our lives, our faulters, our pain
Decisions made now, from now til hereafter, penned in our blood by the Fates' timeless drafter
Opt-for yourself, but do what is right, let your love of all flow, into all life's light
With the war drums of age and the horns of time sounding
The docket of our love and life's judgement expounding
Until kingdom come, here upon earth, fill your life's cup with none but mirth
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Re: Paean
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by Lilymaemax on
Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 08:04:31 PM AEST
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just love this very thought provoking (HAD TO USE THE DICTONARY TO LOOK UP ALTILOQUENCE)so I learned something also.I have felt caught up in the circles of life.I have come to the conclusion to make each day count and do not regret.Brilliant poem.One that will keep you thinking.
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Re: Paean
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 03:50:56 AM AEST
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And those ripples extend a far greater reach than we could ever know or
expect . We can't ever get our feet wet without stirring a few ripples. But
you are right. Life becomes much more enjoyable and wondrous when the
ripples we create are full of mirth. Problem is, emotions cloud judgment and
make us say and do things we might not, had we the time and forethought
to calm ourselves and really think about it. Humans are hopeless when
it comes to reacting on the spur. Your piece holds words to live by. :)
Thanks for this. Excellent post, Steve!
~ Breezy
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Re: Paean
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by karoody on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 10:00:12 AM AEST
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thank you for this one steve! again, wonderful words of wisdom for the ones you love!
may your cup always be full...
thank you again
hugs and best of my blessings
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