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Right To The Core
Contributed by
xxx_fem_fatale_xxx
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Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 10:54:18 AM in AEST
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The atrosities with you I cant forget,
I'm the perfect lil angel in your bed.
Quietly laying there amongst the teddybears,
Swallowing away the hidden tears.
The atrosities with you I cant forget
Am I nothing more than just your pet?
So much pain, so much hate, so much disbelieve
You are the taker, you are the thief
This innocence shattered to pieces on the floor
Can you hear me scream, dont come back for more?
The perfect lil angel I am no more,
A pet I refuse to be, I'm broken right to the core
~~ Nats ~~
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Re: Right To The Core
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by outlawpoet on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 06:15:05 PM AEST
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i really like this poem it was a good write i enjoyed so thanks
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Re: Right To The Core
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th November 2008 @ 02:11:59 AM AEST
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This is a very sad and powerful poem, Nats. It has brought tears to my eyes. You have packed soooooooo much raw emotion into such a short write. You did great!
The last two lines seem to bring hope and a whole lot of defiance.
*huge hug*
Take care of yourself.
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Re: Right To The Core
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 07:04:52 PM AEST
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Wow, this one really make me sit up and take notice.
Excellent piece Nats, really does show a talent for writing
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