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I'm So Sick of Settling
Contributed by
allforyou
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Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 11:14:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I'm so sick of settling,
where's my smile; you tell me.
Can you hear me screaming,
through the pulse in my hand.
I want it to defeat me,
but I'm too strong; I can't be weak.
And still you don't hear me,
well, I have nothing left to say.
My mind has too much space to think,
but the emptiness has quite a ring,
when it whirls in with the wind.
and I'm headed for a crash.
So keep dreaming like you do,
maybe one day they'll come true.
Or maybe one day.......you'll open your eyes.
And see its not worth having hope,
when you are nothing but a joke.
But maybe one day.......you'll open your eyes.
Copyright ©
allforyou
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2008-10-04 11:14:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I'm So Sick of Settling
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:00:28 PM AEST (User
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no need to settle, the world is yours... find your fairytale ;)
nicely done,
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Re: I'm So Sick of Settling
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:19:48 PM AEST (User
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So much emotion in this peice. I can relate to what you mean. Some people just never seem to notice the person in front of them. You deserve better, I agree with Wiz. You deserve to find what makes you feel free.
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Re: I'm So Sick of Settling
(User Rating: 1 ) by outlawpoet on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 07:24:45 PM AEST (User
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i really liked this poem good write |
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