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Always Survive
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 09:22:46 AM in AEST
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One day hell will welcome with doors open wide
It's greatest disciple, devout not convert
Blood runs so dark within venomous veins
The poison you leak, infecting your world
You are the serpent, unbending yet coiled
Sharp stabbing dagger that gores away truth
Face is facade, a mockery of honour
Words that mean nothing, acceptable lies
Bred from the sediment, putrid and vile
Fashioned deception for those without eyes
Smiling asassin fakes vagagond to prince
Deepest contempt hid in clever disguise
Truth is your antichrist, greed is your god
Elegant platitudes no more than tools
You are the architect, seller of self
Evil unpunished, you will always survive
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Re: Always Survive
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by karoody on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 09:33:48 AM AEST
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You should not apologize for writing your anger down. It must come out somewhere. So, you made an enjoyable read. May that be your satisfaction. Not so much the read itself. But the fact that YOU are not someone who has to commit evil deeds unto others to feel good. Smile at that and keep serving your uncle well. Take a deep breath. Believe it or not, you can let go of your anger and leave it to the laws of karmic order. It takes care of people like this. And you can quote me on that.
Take care
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Re: Always Survive
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 08:53:08 PM AEST
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| I find writing the feelings as I travel through each day gives me a fresh look at what is really in there and yes anger, disappointment, frustration, and pain all come through on a daily basis. A good job on this and I am sure many others have witnessed the same behaviours. Thanks for sharing and good luck with the vultures...ND |
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Re: Always Survive
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 03:43:58 PM AEST
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Wwwwwwooooo!! Handsome,
I've never seen this side of you but I can tottally relate. When I grit my teeth, stomp my foot, then MY pen trembles as I try to get it on paper even satan his self trembles.
The person or persons are already in hell that they created them selves.
When It get to the point I've had enuff I say, God I've had all I can take, Please take care of it". Oh don't ever think that it's pretty either cause I know from experience that when it comes around God's way are mysterous, but I know the hand of God,( luv) will reighn. When you step back and let God have his way in time you will find the inner peace you seek.
Us poets, writers have to feel it at times in order to relate to the subject.
Hang tuf my dear, handsome friend as joy cometh in the morning.
Jus kick *** and let Gop take the names.
Big luv, many huge huggs, smiles, knowledge, understanding, wisdom, peace, joy,
emy |
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