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In Dreams
Contributed by
shelby
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Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 04:43:18 AM in AEST
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We fell into a separate slumber
Our dreams carried us away.
Meeting in the land of golden fields
Our thoughts adrift, with the trees swayed.
Spiritual embraces, holding tight.
The hug from afar felt tender and light.
Bliss filled dream, where love light streamed
two souls lost in sweet surrender.
Daylight flickered through the lace
Eyes softly awakened to the dawn.
Before the beginning of another day.
I paused to look but you were gone.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-10-04 04:43:18]
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Re: In Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 04:53:55 AM AEST
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Ah! meeting within dreams.
Tender light and love.
Just hate to wake up from those! |
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Re: In Dreams
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by karen65 on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 05:19:33 AM AEST
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another beautiful write from you,i miss your writing :(
anyways take care
hugs |
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Re: In Dreams
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 06:18:42 AM AEST
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beautiful my friend
Shari |
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Re: In Dreams
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by lnnie on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 07:29:49 AM AEST
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wonderful story poem. I love this way of doing poetry.
Beautifully moving us to the end of the story.
Great |
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Re: In Dreams
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by karoody on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 07:50:15 AM AEST
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it's always amazing the connection two people can have. they are so close to you in soul, yet the miles say otherwise. wild feeling, huh? beautiful write. but i am not surprised~
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Re: In Dreams
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 08:58:55 PM AEST
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| Excellent. The joy of dreams. Next best is to think it is a dream and find out your awake. |
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Re: In Dreams
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by zenith66 on
Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 02:32:20 AM AEST
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| ahh such a comforting feeling here, as if there is a secret little place of light and peace, i hope i can find it, well done!!! |
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Re: In Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 02:18:03 PM AEST
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| so sad... very well written shelby. another of my favorites of yours |
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Re: In Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:29:27 AM AEST
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Oh hun, how beautiful and sad all at once. I love dreams. They can bring such
wonder to our lives, but when they leave and reality comes crashing down,
a certain melancholy always seems to follow. You captured that perfectly
in this. Well done and well said, poet.
*hugs*
~ Breezy
(hoping you are safe)
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Re: In Dreams
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by RougeCoeur on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 01:32:22 PM AEST
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Love, the stuff dreams are made of,
Sadly sometimes it it fades with the coming dawn.
Very nicely expressed and my pleasure to review.
I recently posted one titled "Sealed With a Kiss". You might enjoy the read as well.
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Re: In Dreams
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by Lionel on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 12:25:10 AM AEST
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| A very romantic poem. Reminds me of Orbison's song: "In Dreams". |
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