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something to believe in
Contributed by
spooky
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Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 09:58:36 AM in AEST
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i write for dreams to happen,,
i write with the thought of happiness,,
i write not for comments or solutions,
i write for something to believe in,
i see the things that everyone believe 's in,,
hope, faith, happiness,
that the things that they want to have,
the things to believe in,
when you see the things that hurt people ,
divorce, abuse, murder, even jealousy,
they feel that there's no reason to believe,,
but there is, for a fraction of a moment you believed,,
that there was a way, a escape, a getaway,
that's the things to believe in or what they say,,
the things to believe in is the things that we cherish,
the memorys of lost loves, the memories of what we shared,
the things that made us happy,
to be together as we were,
not together for reasons,,
for we are not Gods ,,
we feel the things that we shouldn't or want,,
but we do, forgive me,,for these words
but sometimes i wish i had some one,,
a love to share, a lifetime,
something to believe in
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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Re: something to believe in
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:33:52 AM AEST
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This was splendid! Very emotional and full of want. With hope, wish, desire, and a head held high there is always belief. Hold up your head and see God, and he will grant you all you purely desire as long as you believe. Sometimes it happens slower than we wish, but it will happen.
BRAVO!
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Re: something to believe in
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by shelby on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 04:08:52 AM AEST
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Strong and powerful write here my friend.
We always need to believe don't we? Even when there are times it is hard to hold on to.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: something to believe in
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 09:14:00 AM AEST
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although u put this as sad poetry, i think it's full of hope or at least some. I think when there's nothing left in the end, we're gonna believe. nice write, and keep writing for as long as it gets u to believe in someone/something/anything. take care
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Re: something to believe in
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 10:22:14 PM AEST
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so beautifully expressed, i feel like this too sometimes, but im not completely alone, i have the dogs and the kids come home pretty often from college, i just really loved this poem,
hugs n' love nessa |
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