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You Love Her (Still)
Contributed by
Tokay
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Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 06:15:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You love her, right?
You always say you need her
I watched the wish there break you.
She’s with him, right?
He doesn’t appreciate,
He’s never around-
She deserves more love than that
And you could save her.
She hurts you, right?
Every time you wake up aching
Knowing that she’s yours
Reaching for her dream dried lips,
Finding sheets instead.
Unwanted, right?
Well, I do know how you feel
For each time you reach for her
You’re turning away from me.
Copyright ©
Tokay
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2008-10-02 18:15:07]
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Re: You Love Her (Still)
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by karoody on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 07:01:01 PM AEST
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Very well, written...it doesn't have to rhyme to be poetry. if someone has you believing otherwise, bring them to me so that i may wring their neck for you! you got your emotion out. you evoked emotions in me. Sounds like a job well done. ah, but what do i know. my name is not shakespeare. geez. there is more than one genius style out there. you stick with what you feel
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Re: You Love Her (Still)
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 09:46:55 AM AEST
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Trying to contain myself after reading karoody's comment.....lol (she's right, though)
This touched me to the very core of my being... Lots of pain in this write.... Nicely done...
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