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A Sisterhood of Traditions
Contributed by
karoody
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Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 04:45:34 PM in AEST
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Traditionally, you are not my sister
If you decide to follow tradition
The mother that bore us
With these likenesses
Had nothing to do with genetics
There is no biology in the story
But traditionally we both know
I tell tradition
Exactly where to go
I met your human form
Not too long ago
But it felt as if
I had known you all along
Our hands have never physically touched
Perhaps the fates will never allow it
It is not necessary really
Nice as it would be
To hug you, sister of mine
And tell you how blessed I am
To ignite the flames within
Next to a sister like this
Copyright ©
karoody
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2008-10-02 16:45:34]
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Re: A Sisterhood of Traditions
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by emystar on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 06:13:21 PM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Sisterhood of Traditions
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by Lilymaemax on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 06:59:18 PM AEST
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Very touching .Enjoyed this!Glad you have had this chance to meet this person.thankyou again
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Re: A Sisterhood of Traditions
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by navydocny on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 08:38:34 PM AEST
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Once again, a wonderous write!
Everyone should take a day and see through your eyes....
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Re: A Sisterhood of Traditions
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 08:39:41 PM AEST
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this is beautiful and anyone who has touched flames with you is blessed
Shari |
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Re: A Sisterhood of Traditions
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 03:06:55 AM AEST
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This part is soooo you:
Had nothing to do with genetics
There is no biology in the story
But traditionally we both know
I tell tradition
Exactly where to go
I can hear you saying that so clearly.
This is a very beautiful write. *applauds*
And I cannot agree with Steve more. I would add that if there were more people like you in this world it would be a much better place.....much much better.
Loves ya
Tim |
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Re: A Sisterhood of Traditions
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 06:49:06 AM AEST
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Kara, this is priceless....May those flames continue to burn brightly for you...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: A Sisterhood of Traditions
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 09:15:56 AM AEST
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A standing *ovation* for you my dear Karabear.
Wow hun, I wished there were more gorgeous
people like you in this world. It would be a much
better place I guarantee you.
A beautiful write. Thanks for sharing it.
May your flame always burn so brightly dearest Kara~
love & hugs from across the blue,
Sue |
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