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Celtic child
Contributed by
lilymaemax
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Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 06:33:20 AM in AEST
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Fourteen Junes ago I gave birth,
To our first beautiful daughter,
She came into this world, our precious earth,
With solemn eyes and then a chuckle of laughter.
I looked at her in her daddys arms,
Wrapped in hospital linen,
And reached out too touch her tiny palms.
That tiny dot,has never ceased to delight and confound me,
Her manner kind,always ready to please,
And Celtic beauty needed to be seen.
Her countenance so gentle,eyes reflect the Atlantic storm
And hair long and burnished with hues copper and gold,
But this beauty is of reminscent of times gone by,
Of Irish queens and maidens of old.
She matches any of regal stand
In looks,temperment and manner
Of those who came from this green and noble land.
As she has grown older she has shown,
Me many things a child born,
In the wrong age,Known
To many ,loved by many
My Celtic child Bethany.
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lilymaemax
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Re: Celtic child
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 06:59:20 AM AEST
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| mam! thank you so much! it made me feel
so special! thank you!
love you lots,
Beth xxxxxx
ps: I do indeed wish i'd been born back
in Celtic or Tolkien times! but i'm glad
i'm with you!!
one ring to bring them all,
and in the darkness bind them......... |
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Re: Celtic child
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by roseabsolute on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 11:37:43 AM AEST
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Oh, how beautiful. I love that hers is the first
comment as well, it somehow makes the
poem sweeter if possible. Wonderfully done.
Rose* |
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Re: Celtic child
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 07:32:02 PM AEST
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Well bound.
It's beautiful, really.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Celtic child
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by navydocny on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 07:36:35 PM AEST
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I love poetry about our children..
Great homage paid here!
Too bad some kids don't realize just how important they are to their parents. I try to let mine know always. They're like our own little deities that we offer our lives to...
Great poem once again...
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Re: Celtic child
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by Puppy on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 10:25:25 PM AEST
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aaawwh!
This is such a sweet poem i really enjoyed it!
Great write!!
Puppy :)
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Re: Celtic child
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by Lilymaemax on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 08:28:14 AM AEST
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You know her well Jarred .Its a good job we see behind those eyes.
Lilymae |
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Re: Celtic child
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by karoody on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 08:15:12 PM AEST
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Sounds like you got a bit of an old soul in your arms, dear! How beautiful! I love your nod to your Celtic ancestry! I see so many that deny their roots! How refreshing to see them embraced!
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