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In Ink and Verse
Contributed by
kiss4roq
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Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 03:11:48 PM in AEST
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Within the soul lies the meaning,
vague yet full of inspiration.
It can not be seen, nor felt,
yet affects every aspect of life.
Seldom does it stand aside,
to let life run its course.
With each obstacle overcome,
its shown triumphant above.
Far from the mind does it lie,
But over one’s heart broods.
Radiating in one’s smile,
and gleaming bright in tears.
From heart, to hand, to pen, to paper,
it flows with definite strength.
Passion from what lies in the soul,
yet hidden in ink and verse.
Copyright ©
kiss4roq
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2008-09-30 15:11:48]
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Re: In Ink and Verse
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by Poetic_Punk on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 10:12:37 PM AEST
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| interesting concept, a poem on the idea of poetry? |
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Re: In Ink and Verse
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by lnnie on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 01:50:51 PM AEST
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Loved the structure beginning middle and end. Was looking however for a big finish.
What lies in the soul?
How about "spirit drives the soul's fire
and subfuses this ink and verse"
this has dramatic flair and gives the reader a sense of completion.
You could personalize the ending with " from heart, to hand, to pen, to paper, it flows from me strong
and my passion erupts from my soul and
hides hidden in my ink and verse."
just ideas |
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