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When I die.
Contributed by
bhav
on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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When I die,
My body will turn to ashes,
If someone has ever known me,
Liked me or loved me,
His or her world will come down crashing.
Tears might flow when a loved one remembers me,
Sitting up there with holy lord I would be holding every drop of those tears on my hand
And will be thanking you for loving me.
Day after day as one gets on with life,
I will become just a photo in your album and will be remembered when you open the album and will recollect your past life.
I will never remember the good that I have done,
Isn’t it some thing that is to be forgotten after it is done?
What I will remember is a harsh word I might have said,
Which might have hurt someone.
I have lived my life in my poems,
I will always live with my poems.
Praise is something, which everyone wants,
If one doesn’t receive it,
It becomes like a bad spirit that haunts.
“ Oh! Bhavik how do these things matter to you now,
As you are dead.” asks death.
I say my dearest friend death every time someone will read my poem,
I will be walking up and down around him,
Until he finishes and reacts to my poem.
I don’t claim to be good,
Because it comes with ego in disguise with a hood.
When I die don’t pour my ashes in the water,
Don’t throw them around,
If there is some empty space, just mix them with mother earth.
I would love to be a part of the soil, which gives us beautiful flowers and animals,
Nutritious vegetables,
Space to live and won’t it be lovely to be one with mother earth.
Copyright ©
bhav
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2003-03-19 10:35:00]
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Re: When I die.
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 10:59:20 AM AEST
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good write interesting .. i am sure you will live on through your poems
Sharon |
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Re: When I die.
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:16:54 PM AEST
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| such spell-binding words! this is so powerful and moving! no doubt your words will carry on in the hearts of many. |
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Re: When I die.
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by theangelestdevil on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 08:03:00 PM AEST
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| this is such a beautiful poem. im sure u will live through ur poems. |
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Re: When I die.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 12:25:48 AM AEST
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Sharon,
It was my pleasure to know that you liked my poem. Life is so very uncertain. I may die thee next moment, but I am sure that I will live on through my poems
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Re: When I die.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 12:28:56 AM AEST
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Karoody,
Thanks for making my day by writing in that you have liked my poem .To be appreciated for my work means a lot to me. Hope to make it really big someday. With you best wishes I am sure I will make it big some time in the near future.
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Re: When I die.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 12:31:11 AM AEST
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theangelestdevil,
Thanks a lot for liking my poem. With people like you who appreciate my poem, I am assured about one thing, I will live on long after I am dead.
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