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The Enchanted Forest
Contributed by
Starchild7
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Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 09:15:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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A land of enchantment awaits to thrill and delight
You to the very core of who you are. Mystical sights
Draw you into their weave and the magic sparks your
Spirit as you come alive in this wondrous beauty of all
Things that your dreams of the heart are made.
The spirits of nature are all around, they come in
Your dreamtime to reveal their secrets to you. Embodying
You in their love and protection they whisk you away
And uncover the many hidden treasures of the universe
That have been buried since ancient times past.
Releasing yourself into the pure mystery of this land
We once forgot. It is time to revive it, to bring the life
Back to it the way it’s meant to be full of peace, love and
Beauty for all to share. We are all freespirits soaring through
The clouds away to infinity forever more.
Starchild
Copyright ©
Starchild7
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2008-09-30 09:15:24]
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Re: The Enchanted Forest
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 10:44:08 AM AEST
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Very nice write. Very enchanting and full
of lore. A very enjoyable read.
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Re: The Enchanted Forest
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 11:52:10 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed the atmosphere of this piece. It was so delightfully
enchanting. Like the being toured around by a fairy sprite, while
wonder cast its spell on the reader's heart. I adore the last two lines
of the second stanza. Just beautiful.
~ Breezy
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Re: The Enchanted Forest
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 02:58:01 PM AEST
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| Beautiful thoughts from a beautiful soul |
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Re: The Enchanted Forest
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by Starchild7 on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 01:02:28 AM AEST
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Thank you all so much for the lovely replies i really appreciate it.
Starchild |
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Re: The Enchanted Forest
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 01:40:05 AM AEST
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A very lovely piece, full of imagery and delight.
Welcome to YPDC! |
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Re: The Enchanted Forest
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 05:44:06 PM AEST
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This is enchanting, and your a remarkable
writter, your artistry is a breath of fresh air,
your style is a treasure 2 be hold . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: The Enchanted Forest
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 08:11:00 PM AEST
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great post!
wonderful and captivating!
d |
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