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Revenge
Contributed by
MorbidAngel
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Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The tension is rising
No hope to be found
At this point in time
I'd rather be 6ft underground
My sanity is starting to fall
My beliefs in God no longer exist
The urge to kill constantly growing
For revenge I can't resist
To blame would be my family
Hated all relatives
They'll be asking me "Why?"
With the torment that I'll give
I'm not afraid of getting caught
arrested, put to death
for I am already dead inside
I've taken my last breath
Everyone around me now shall be warned
Beware when my mind snaps
I should already be in a padded room
Muzzle, straight jacket, and straps
No one knows of the pain I could cause
How many ways I know how to kill
I can find anything, and turn it into a weapon
Thats part of the adventure and thrill
Copyright ©
MorbidAngel
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2003-03-19 09:35:00]
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Re: Revenge
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 11:26:38 AM AEST
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What an incredible poem. Such raw emotion. Good work! I love it!!
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Re: Revenge
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 01:44:38 PM AEST
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| terrifying poem... excellent and extremely well written, but terrifying... kudos to you... blessings... |
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Re: Revenge
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:28:17 PM AEST
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remind me to never anger you! jk
this is a wonderfully powerful write! i love it, and i am sorry for the pain and anger you endured. my best wishes for you! |
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Re: Revenge
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by theangelestdevil on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 08:09:28 PM AEST
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| wat a poem. so much anger in it but i love it. i like the way u rhymed in it. |
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Re: Revenge
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by theangelestdevil on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 08:09:49 PM AEST
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| wat a poem. so much anger in it but i love it. i like the way u rhymed in it. |
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Re: Revenge
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by theangelestdevil on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 08:09:52 PM AEST
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| wat a poem. so much anger in it but i love it. i like the way u rhymed in it. |
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Re: Revenge
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by kittiekat on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 01:36:27 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem. So much anger and hate showed well in this write. It's creepy but good...>^..^< |
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Re: Revenge
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by AngryPrincess on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:47:30 PM AEST
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whoa, lol thats a little scary...but cool beans im the same...great poem
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