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The Hands of Time
Contributed by
Catalina
on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 05:28:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If I could,
I surely would,
without a doubt.
Turn back the hands of time...
Things would be different,
Oh so different...
For It would not have passed me by...
All the I love you's left unsaid,
would be spoken times over a thousand...
Not one person would have a doubt,
Each and everyone,
Would know how I felt...
If I could,
I surely would,
Turn back the hands of time...
Nothing would be forgotten,
I would have peice of mind...
All the fears were only a facade,
To keep me from reaching that connection
With something higher above...
I would have had faith,
In the roughest of times...
I would have lent my hand,
To the man that was blind...
Turn back the clock
That Is my one dream...
For these hands of time,
hold more than I've seen...
Copyright ©
Catalina
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2008-09-29 05:28:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Hands of Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 05:48:28 AM AEST (User
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if only we could,
nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: The Hands of Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Loende on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 06:08:15 AM AEST (User
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This is really beautiful and I can SO relate. Just...lovely. Job well done.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: The Hands of Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 08:59:18 AM AEST (User
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I know how you feel. If I could turn back time, I would not have done or said the things that I have come to regret and will always regret. Great job! |
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Re: The Hands of Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by roseabsolute on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 12:05:12 PM AEST (User
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Regret can be one of the worst and helpless
of feelings, but you've penned something
lovely from yours.
Rose* |
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