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AFTER GLOW
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emystar
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Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 08:29:39 PM in AEST
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Our connection will never fade
Time just seasons, then ignites,
Lighting our darkness days.
Our touching is really out of site.
Darlin this after glow will burn
Till we touch magically again
My heads spinning
Till we touch again.
After glow, heads spins
Touch again,
Our energy, can run space ships
Helps sun shine each day.
We blow on past life's pain
To ignite once again our way.
We fly on past our daily chores
All ho hum boring things to do.
There may be time bogging us down
Still, longing, waiting here for you.
When we touch, time stands back.
Our world's join in outer space.
We soar beyond our mortal realm
When we touch souls, face to face.
Always luv,
emy
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by spooky on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 09:38:13 PM AEST
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beautifully written with heart,,
a friend in words..spooky |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by wizard on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 11:42:19 PM AEST
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beautifully done emy,
would love to hear it to music,
wiz |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 11:42:58 PM AEST
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omigosh Emy, how G O R G E O U S !!!
This was exceptional, sweet friend. I think of all your
writes, I love this one the most! You romance the
coldest, loneliest hearts with this, hun. Your undying
devotion and love shine through in this and we are
the lucky ones who get to witness it. This is just FULL
of compelling and poetic lines.
A complete and utter inspiration!
Beautiful work, sweets.
~ Breezy
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 03:14:47 AM AEST
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Emy,
This is among your better work. It is completely inspiring and just simply BEAUTIFUL! So specific and wonderfully honest and humane. It touches the heart of the reader, but not just us a poets. This is something every individual can relate to. This poem is universal at heart!
A perfect triumph!
SUPERB!
SCM |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by shelby on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 04:46:41 AM AEST
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Em,
you always capture my heart with your sweet words.
Ever flowing. Lovely.
Michelle |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 06:34:48 AM AEST
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wonderful
Shari |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 11:32:55 AM AEST
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emy,
The longing of the heart can be expressed
in many ways and yours is deep with love
and emotion.
Awesome write.....Mike |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 12:10:41 PM AEST
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Oh Emy, This is so beautiful...I think this is now my fav of yours.....
Hugs and Love
Jeni |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 04:22:25 PM AEST
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Emy~
This is absolutely awesome. I love it!
I'm so glad I stopped by your pages to read
this. This is definitely my favourite of yours.
Your beautiful loving heart shines radinatly
throughout this song. Well done dearest Emy~
love & hugs,
sue m |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by karoody on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 06:52:23 PM AEST
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you can hear the beauty of friendship, and how those miles nevr damage the bond. they actually make it stronger. but oh, they sure make our heart ache....
bravo!
kara |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 08:05:11 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem as all of your poems are! Thanks for another great write! |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by lnnie on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 12:54:50 PM AEST
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When we touch, time stands back.
Our world's join in outer space.
We soar beyond our mortal realm
When we touch souls, face to face.
This is a very powerful passage. I am just staring to read. Will read more |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by Adam on
Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 01:18:15 AM AEST
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"Our energy, can run space ships
Helps sun shine each day."
I wish I had written that, abstract, powerful but retaining it's intimacy. |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 02:07:40 PM AEST
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stunning originality
phil |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 09:49:23 AM AEST
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Lovely feel this has and the lyrics
flow with the song as they tell the
story of love. nicely done emy . . .
((((emystar))))
Happy New Year
thank you also for your read . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: AFTER GLOW
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by Lizz on
Tuesday, 2nd June 2009 @ 11:31:26 AM AEST
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i very much so enjoyed this poem
this out of all of your writings is my favorite
keep up the bone shuddering work
=] |
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