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a once forbidden love
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 05:40:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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thunder bursting
lightning striking
my eyes are crying
for your love,
everything is a mess
since you left,
especially reading
a teardrop you left on my hand
i opened it's window
of a piece of soul
a memory a moment
left untold
i knew how you felt
when our eyes first met
like a flowers golden bloom
on a sacred summers day
and now the rain is falling
the wind is gushing,
washing all the pain
of love once forbidden
hoping for a day
when love will have it's way
to draws us back to that day
for faith to rewrite it's story
as we always wanted to be...
Copyright ©
eternalsunshine
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2008-09-28 17:40:43]
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Re: a once forbidden love
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by wizard on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 01:49:29 AM AEST
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nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: a once forbidden love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 03:06:36 AM AEST
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A wonderful choice of word imagery. Your flow is good and the story told is an endearing hope that breaks the heart and fixes it to inspiration.
Beautiful!
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Re: a once forbidden love
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by roseabsolute on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 11:49:55 AM AEST
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Fine poetry here of love and heartbreak. You
leave your heart on the page.
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