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Sprayed
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 05:43:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It comes with no surprise
As certain as the sunrise
Close your sleepy eyes
Let me hold you while you cry
Hand in mine
Rested you remain
Free of all your troubles, free of all your pain
If at all possible, forever, here, we will remain
A dark room in a comfortable bed
Lay your head on the base of my chest
Rub your hand up and down my leg
Kiss me, now, make me stay
___________
_____
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2008-09-28 05:43:34]
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Re: Sprayed
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by wizard on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 05:46:03 AM AEST
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nicely done,
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Re: Sprayed
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 01:10:23 AM AEST
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jyss,
wow! be still my foolish beating heart! This is unimaginably romantic and
extraordinarily beautiful. This piece is like a gorgeous sunrise; peaceful, quiet
and incredibly lovely. It fills me with the desire to linger here until every last
ray of light fades into another part of the sky.
Just beautiful ~
~ Breezy
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